Talk:Velvet McIntyre/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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There is no major issues in my eyes, but if there is one thing that concerns me, it is the heavy use of SLAM! Wrestling as a source. If possible, can you try to use others. You can still keep SLAM! Wrestling, but try to use it less often. Thanks. User:Zscout370 ^{(Return Fire)} 23:03, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Actually I just found a book that may be of use here. I'll see if I can use it as a source. Nikki♥311 23:15, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Good. I also suggest using http://toolserver.org/~magnus/makeref.php so you can cite the book to conform to Wikipedia formatting. User:Zscout370 ^{(Return Fire)} 23:24, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

That's a handy tool. I added some book sources. Is that sufficient? Nikki♥311 23:47, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Good progress so far. I would also suggest to see what I have done in this article to take hints. Pretty much, when you use one source and it goes to "aa," then it is being used way too much. Try to condense the usage of the reference as much as possible. User:Zscout370 ^{(Return Fire)} 23:55, 18 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Done. I feel like I might go overboard if I do anymore. Nikki♥311 00:09, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

At least it is now at X instead of AC. Another thing, and this won't affect the GA review, is that if a lot of the information in the infobox about a wrestler is coming from the same source, could a new section called "source" be added to the infobox? This will also reduce the heavy reference of the SLAM article. User:Zscout370 ^{(Return Fire)} 01:12, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

I tried this suggestion with this result. I am not sure how I feel about it. What are your thoughts? Nikki♥311 19:13, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Works fine by me, so I reverted. User:Zscout370 ^{(Return Fire)} 20:55, 19 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Okay. Any other suggestions? Nikki♥311 02:27, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

No, passing. User:Zscout370 ^{(Return Fire)} 05:26, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much! :) Nikki♥311 05:44, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Welcome. User:Zscout370 ^{(Return Fire)} 06:04, 20 December 2008 (UTC)[reply]