Talk:Mark Henry/GA1

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This is a very nice article, especially after adding in the weightlifting section. I do have a few things to fix though:

"and a year later, he became a North America, Central America, Caribbean Islands champion." Did he hold three titles or is that a long name for one? Needs to be clarified.
- From what I can tell, it's just the one championship. I've attempted to clarify it. ♥Nici♥Vampire♥Heart♥ 22:08, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
"his first feud in the WWF was with Jerry Lawler who had some harsh words for Henry on an episode of Monday Night Raw in March." I'd go into a bit more detail on what you mean here - what did Lawler say?
- When me and Nici were working on the article, that was stated in the article. I looked at some sources, but they don't really say anything regarding Lawler having "harsh" words for Henry. But, this does mention he began a feud with Lawler. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 16:25, 19 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Where'd be go between Sept 1996 and 1998?

I'll place the article on hold and pass it when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 20:17, 18 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Since the concerns are addressed, I'll pass the article. Wizardman 03:49, 20 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]