Talk:Judgment Day (2008)/GA1
GA Review[edit]
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This is a decent article, but the prose needs some work. These are only samples; please go through the text throughout to spot similar issues:
- "The main event was a Steel cage match, a match fought within a cage formed by placing four sheets of mesh metal around, in, or against the edges of the wrestling ring." – "The main event was a Steel cage match, which is fought in a cage with four sheets of mesh metal around, in, or against the edges of the wrestling ring."
- "up on the"?
- "$21.9" – less than thirty bucks?
- "The event featured seven professional wrestling matches, performances with pre-determined outcomes between wrestlers with fictional personalities that are portrayed as real, were featured on the event's card." – "The event featured ... were featured"?
Also, take a look at the prose at an FA such as No Way Out (2004), which flows a bit better. Gary King (talk) 03:40, 3 December 2008 (UTC)