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The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.
Overall: Article meets all necessary criteria, ALT1 hook is well worded and appropriately sourced. No issues with image either, appropriately licensed, clear depiction of the item. grungaloo (talk) 18:15, 14 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The main hook uses a WP:PRIMARY source as a citation, coupled with the wording it makes it sound a bit promotional. ALT1 is also a bit off with WP:NPOV, but I think it could be fixed by rewording it to "some Microsoft engineers". The source indicates that it was a subset who felt this way and not all. QPQ is still outstanding too. Let me know what you think! grungaloo (talk) 18:15, 14 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review! I've changed ALT1 to use the specific number of opposing employees, which hopefully helps with the NPOV issue. WP:QPQ isn't required for first five noms; this is my first time at DYK, so I wanted to experience the process first before reviewing. Liu1126 (talk) 20:51, 14 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Perfect, ALT1 looks great! And sorry for missing that QPQ, my bad! I'd say this is good to go, thanks! grungaloo (talk) 01:47, 15 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Article meets all necessary criteria, ALT1 hook is well worded and appropriately sourced. No issues with image either, appropriately licensed, clear depiction of the item. grungaloo (talk) 18:15, 14 February 2024 (UTC)